While I meditate on entry VI, which is a bit more demanding, here is V. This was four short quatrains with no particular rhythm, but with the rhyme scheme you see here. It was satisfying–and pleasureable–to expand the lines. Now, they conatain what they were meant originally to express–though more minimal. I like this result. I’ll sleep on the next entry some more tonight.
I like what you did with the rhyme scheme.
The whole piece reads very clean. It’s very nice.