Can be played to a tattoo march in 4/4 time. Prum pum pum pum pum….. Prum pum pum pum pum….. Prum pum pum pum pum….. More analysis and permutations to follow in a few hours…okay well, it’s been a day. (not in a coma, but close)
I couldn’t quite keep the sonnet or haiku formatting without making the rhythmic presentation confusing, therefore I have just inserted both entries into a table.
First the sonnet:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |
---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
I’ll | |||||||
an | -swer | ev(e) | -ry | call, | Though | I | |
know | I | Might | die | quick | -ly; | yet | |
I | will | an | -swer | still. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
While | |||||||
know | -ing | I | could | fall, | and | al- | |
-though | I | Might | be | sick | -ly; | yet | |
an | -swer | them | I | will. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Ev | -en | ||||||
if | I | am | a | -lone, | I’ll | ||
an | -swer | With | con | -vic | -tion; | Nor | |
e | -ven | hes | -i | -tate. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
‘Til | our | ||||||
ty | -rants’ | o | -ver | -thrown, | no | ||
plans | or | Der | -e | -lic | -tion, | will | |
keep | me | from | their | gate. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
If | we | are | in | chains, | and | none | are |
free, | for | Life | is | emp | -ty, | I’ll | |
e | -ven | fight | my | kin. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Doubt | -less, | ’til | re | mains, | -up | -on | the |
sea | or | Land, | of | them, | we | have | |
scat | -tered | to | the | wind. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Free, | is | this, | my | land; | |||
joined, | but | not | by | chains; | |||
‘Til | no | man | can | stand; | |||
‘Til | no | man | re | -mains. |
Perhaps the final couplet could be used as a cadence/chorus.
And here is the haiku in similar format:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 |
---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
This | is | what | was | true, | in | that | |
mo | -ment | when | I | knew: | |||
I | knew | I | would | go; | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Hear | the | call | and | know | that | my | |
du | -ty | would | lie | here | |||
If | the | call | were | near. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Mine | or | for | my | own, | If | I | |
had | to | act | a | -lone, | |||
whe | -ther | I | was | sick, | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
If | my | death | were | quick, | I | would | |
not | ac | -cept | a | cage. | |||
Nev | -er | mind | my | age. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
I | could | not | for | -give, | for | I | |
know | I | can | not | live | |||
with | my | life | in | doubt. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
En | -e | -mies | with | -out, | kill | them; | |
e | -ven | if | our | kin, | |||
en | -e | -mies | with | -in. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Free | this | land | shall | be | From | the | |
sea | to | shi | -ning | sea. | |||
We | shall | car | -ry | on. | |||
Prum | pum | pum | pum | Pumm | … | … | … |
Free | -dom, | ne | -ver | free, | It | is | |
your, | and | my, | dec | -ree | |||
‘Til | we’re | dead | and | gone. |
This project brings to light another relationship between sonnets and haiku. Two haiku can be plucked out of each couplet of a sonnet, and/or two haiku can stand in for each couplet of a sonnet padded by syllables on either side. A couplet is 20 syllables and a haiku is 17. It would be an interesting project to compose a sonnet. out of seven haiku, using that idea, and compose a sequence of 7 haiku from a sonnet.
Perhaps there will be a couple of sonnets and a haiku in the days to come using that method. It sounds Like it would be fun.
I’ve recently thought that one could write a sonnet in blank verse (non-rhyming iambic pentameter) and then arrange the rhymes afterward. That, too, would be an interesting project. I think I’m going to do both of these, or rather, all three of these, in the near future.
OH WOW, INTERESTING, REALLY INTERESTING,,,HMMM
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I do tend toward detail in my explanations : )
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