as i slept
just inside
by a veranda
open to the sea
on a cool night
just right
to let
the wind
and moonlight
and the stars
blow quietly
past me
caressing
as i slept
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David Emeron: Sonnets 
This is beautiful.
The form you’ve chosen to write the poem in is evocative of your subject. Very nice, I can almost feel the stars breeze softly by me.
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