Part 8: (decasyllabic line)

Here are no more than
The same thoughts with fewer words,
But still in freeverse.

This is the first time the words have been simplified or rearranged.   Here we have 140 syllables in 14 lines, still the same thoughts somewhat condensed but still fairly clear.

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