of four or even five
the Rhymes trip, unbidden, along they go
I gave them no assistance
Tag Archives: Writing
Naturally I have made things…
…hardest on myself whilst “zeroing in,” as it were, on my six month milestone. This is as my psyche seems to strive for irony.
Sonnet I: Grades of Paper
Upon a time, my love, a diary
Of paper, stained with words set down in ink;
Revealing all a boy might feel, and think,
And strive, and pray, and wonder what might be;
That, would he, worthy of thy love, decree?
On paper, yes; but also on the brink–
Withholding nothing more–profess; and think,
If then not worthy, tears he shed for thee
Would blur his ink; such tears as fell like rain
To paper; ran his words, as ran his heart,
Cascading down, as rivers, all his pain;
So mixt with joy, and hope we would not part.
Yet now, his tears, upon a keyboard, fall,
Not mixt with joy, nor pain, nor seen at all.
This sonnet is part of a short sequence; click here to read it all:
Intro 1: Time Over Time
Wrote, of that I wrote
Within a thought once within,
Without is without.
Always it began,
As reliable as though
It ran like clockwork,
My love, did I sit,
Outside, under an awning,
Watched and listened as it rained.
And sometimes, I cried;
All my tears, all my ink, mixed;
And wrote I such things:
Intro: More Words
I like this better
After thinking about it
for a few hours.
Part 7: (14 lines by clause)
Here you will find the words themselves, presented in freeverse as simply and compactly as possible. The order of the words is not changed; there is nothing added or removed, but punctuated in order to make it easier to follow the words–something just short of prose, perhaps. And although the line lengths appear problematic, it so happens that there are 14 of these lines.
I should state that the words were originally written this way, although you might have suspected that the original form was presented in part 5. In any case, the words are easily understood now.
Just read the words. Think about what they mean; perhaps in answer to the original prompt:
Part 6: (natural breaks)
One thing for certain
You can tell what is going on here
Without punctuation