One thing for certain
You can tell what is going on here
Here, it is very, very apparent that, even though I was not trying to do so, I was no doubt thinking in sonnet form on some subconscious level. You will now see four distinct parts–even a shorter one at the end, can be seen clearly when we format the words thus. We still have not changed a word, but merely added line breaks and stanza breaks for clarity. Does it help? Does this make it easier to perceive the meaning of the words? Does it make it easier for you to imagine the evolving sonnet and/or how it might look or sound?
I see Björn has already been here! (and perhaps thought so?)