Things in life evolve. I, now uncaught on
Detail, resolve that haiku, when planned more
Strictly, will not break a single thought on
Separate lines. On the other hand, for
Sonnets, great shrines more strict, more pursuing
Sound; the stricture of both could recombine
With pressure when mixed together. Doing
Round numbers of haiku, would misalign
Within a sonnet. It makes me sigh, too;
For, on my honour, I’d cry if that myth
Were true. Instead, there must be eight haiku
To see it through; and then I combat with
Four pale sounds. And its sextet, for a
Tail, sports “etcetera, etcetera.”
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Clever, clever.
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Thank you. Another example follows. A different way to embed haiku into sonnet form: https://davidemeron.com/another-example-of-embedded-haiku/
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Bravo!! It reads like a house a-fire! What fun…
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etcetera… etcetera….
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